Jay's comment included in the story above. :-)
“Well Damn, that’s going to make getting with Commander Lyra a little difficult. I guess all I want to know is how bad is it? What’s the value on your head, and more importantly mine?“ Striker then waits an obscenely long time in silence...
I added Tom's comment to the post.
No changes needed at all. Perfect. :-)
Mark
Mark, I've continued the story with some information about the Order of Veridian faith. If you need to make changes to how Adamn talks or what he says, feel free. Just let me know about it, so I can change the story as it is currently...
Very good story. :-)
Adamn voted for the drone.
Part 2 was very good too! :-)
Mark
Cam forwards the retrieval message to the team's message boxes, marked IMPORTANT. He calls a meeting on the bridge and explains that we have a bounty on our heads. Black Star Hunters will be after us. He apologizes and says, "You can leave me with...
I moved the discussion of bounties, and voting for Cam to stay with the crew to its own story located here:
http://www.lordsofrpg.com/blog/view/2410/a-vote-for-or-against-cam
Please make any votes or comments regarding the continuing...
Feel free to make plans, talk to each other, or question Jacob Billings further. I own you a message from Captain Marosh about where to meet. And a message from Tony Gold about the "retrieval job."
Also, feel free to write any...